Thank you so much for welcoming me into your class earlier in the week. I really enjoyed getting to know you all and starting some activities together.
The amount of detail you have included in your post is incredible. You have made a stance on what you believe in and I applaud you for this. It sounds as though you have been reading up on Trump’s decision to build the wall and used this to support what you believe in. I am interested to know where you have been finding your information?
Have you had a discussion about this topic in class? I am really interested to hear what the rest of your classmates think about this topic and whether you have considered their thoughts?
The sophistication in your writing blew me away as I was expecting this level of writing from a year 8. I am really looking forward to reading more of your posts and opinions over the summer. Maybe on your next post you could include more colour and pictures. This tends to attract other bloggers to your page.
Kia ora Ronan,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for welcoming me into your class earlier in the week. I really enjoyed getting to know you all and starting some activities together.
The amount of detail you have included in your post is incredible. You have made a stance on what you believe in and I applaud you for this. It sounds as though you have been reading up on Trump’s decision to build the wall and used this to support what you believe in. I am interested to know where you have been finding your information?
Have you had a discussion about this topic in class? I am really interested to hear what the rest of your classmates think about this topic and whether you have considered their thoughts?
The sophistication in your writing blew me away as I was expecting this level of writing from a year 8. I am really looking forward to reading more of your posts and opinions over the summer. Maybe on your next post you could include more colour and pictures. This tends to attract other bloggers to your page.
Have a lovely weekend,
Megan